Hi Jensyn, this is Mrs Cameron. Thanks for sharing your video that you made. I liked it how you included some extra colour, and extended the activity by editing your video. I think you could have added more detail to your explanation of why you had decided to give a comment thumbs up or down, what was it about the comment you said was the best that made you think that?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Jensyn, this is Mrs Cameron. Thanks for sharing your video that you made. I liked it how you included some extra colour, and extended the activity by editing your video. I think you could have added more detail to your explanation of why you had decided to give a comment thumbs up or down, what was it about the comment you said was the best that made you think that?
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