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Wednesday, 8 May 2019

How to feel calm

How to feel calm
Intro: Feeling calm is important because it is nice to feel calm and fun!. Here is a explanation
about feeling calm.


P1: How i know is when i go red like a volcano and i scrunch
my fists and i get a angry look on my face and i start charging
at people I feel angry when my sister lily is annoying. I also
fell and angry when my mom tells me to wait or to do the dishes.


P2: What i do when i am mad is walk to kit kat and flip the
sand timer and watch it for 5 minutes. Or sometimes i
think of something exciting that's going to happen
sometime.When i am at kit kat i take deep breaths
and sit there.


P3: My happy places. My happy place is in my
room in my house with my chromebook becauses
its just me and no one else and i get to watch
my favorite videos.My other happy place is on the computer
playing my favorite game roblox with my friends because it is
so fun.My last happy place is with my friends on the
playground,at my house,at there house or biking
down the street.


P4: How i know when i am calm. I know when
i am calm because i start to smile and my
checks stop turning red my heart stops
racing like a race car the lava from the
volcano inside starts to settle i start to speak
more and i start to laugh.

8 comments:

  1. this explains alot about calm

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    1. Dear Avi
      Thanks so much avi for your wonderful feed back!
      I love how you said what it explains about!
      Maybe next time you could add more detail to your comments Like EX this is what i like about it... EX: Maybe next time... EX: Kind regards [Yourname]

      Kind regards Jensyn!

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  2. hey Jensyn

    I like the way it is so long it may take ages to read. Maybe next time you can make it shorter,also I found only 2 mistakes.

    kind regards Aedyn

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    1. Kia Ora, Aedyn
      Thank you for your feed back can you please show me the two mistakes so i can fix them by the way thanks for the feed back i will try to make my storeys shorter.

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