Hi Jensen, it's good to see a cybersmart blog post today. You have all the elements of telling a trusted adult about a situation that doesn't seem right that you encounter online. I see that the setting of each scene is the same and that gives your story consistency. Maybe next time you could change some things, for example your mum walking in to provide a few differences between scenes.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
W.A.L.T make a storyboard about when you are in doubt about something that you find online, talk it out with a trusted adult.
Hi Jensen, it's good to see a cybersmart blog post today. You have all the elements of telling a trusted adult about a situation that doesn't seem right that you encounter online. I see that the setting of each scene is the same and that gives your story consistency. Maybe next time you could change some things, for example your mum walking in to provide a few differences between scenes.
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