Purpose: To Entertain
Audiance: Miss Jain
Plan: Narrator
Once there was a little girl named mia she lived with her
two parents josh and Amanda
two parents josh and Amanda
It was the Maori new year and they were celebrating matariki,
But for Mia she did not know it would be her last matariki with
her parents. Amanda woke up one day to see there mum and
dad laying in bed she tried to wake them up to see that they
were not waking up, Mia ran to the nurse who was located at
the end of town.When she arrived at the nurse she was crying
she told the nurse the tragic accident of her mum and dad.
The nurse sprinted all the way to mias house she decided to
take her sandals off to run faster she got there in about
2 minutes on the dot. She checked the body to say they
died from a heart attack. Mia broke down in tears. She
learned over the years to cope with it. But she decided to go
to the matariki by herself. She had fun watching the
Entertainment,cooking,and watching the star clusters.
She decided that her parents spirit will always be standing
next to her every time she goes to the matariki festival.
But for Mia she did not know it would be her last matariki with
her parents. Amanda woke up one day to see there mum and
dad laying in bed she tried to wake them up to see that they
were not waking up, Mia ran to the nurse who was located at
the end of town.When she arrived at the nurse she was crying
she told the nurse the tragic accident of her mum and dad.
The nurse sprinted all the way to mias house she decided to
take her sandals off to run faster she got there in about
2 minutes on the dot. She checked the body to say they
died from a heart attack. Mia broke down in tears. She
learned over the years to cope with it. But she decided to go
to the matariki by herself. She had fun watching the
Entertainment,cooking,and watching the star clusters.
She decided that her parents spirit will always be standing
next to her every time she goes to the matariki festival.
By jensyn mayben hammond ]
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