Hi Jensyn, thanks for sharing your DLO creation. There are some things I really like and these include all the relevant information your team have provided in a really engaging way and that you collaborated excellently to create this. A couple of suggestions for improvement are to check your spelling and to keep everything positive. Remember too that a couple of sentences under your DLO are required as a reflection of your learning. Keep using your imagination in creative ways!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Jensyn, thanks for sharing your DLO creation. There are some things I really like and these include all the relevant information your team have provided in a really engaging way and that you collaborated excellently to create this. A couple of suggestions for improvement are to check your spelling and to keep everything positive. Remember too that a couple of sentences under your DLO are required as a reflection of your learning. Keep using your imagination in creative ways!
ReplyDeletethank you miss g i will update this with all the currect spelling and all the other things you suggested i will let you no when i have done so
Deletethanks jensyn